Hello and welcome to my article about Australian Sports ,the Australian pronounciation and Australian sights
First of all i want to talk about Australian Sports .
The most of Australian sports are footy (football) and cricket . The term Footy,however ,refers to different codes of football in different states .There is also a classic football phrase that is called : Chewie on ya boot. That means that a opposing team wants to kick a goal . They also play rugby and they have eleven teams . The finals are always held in the last week of september . They also like to go surfing .
In Australian English ,the /t/in difficulty and better is pronounced like a /r/or a t-flap . When you have to pronounciate this sound , the tongue moves back to the back of the mouth after briefly touching its roof . The pronounciation mostly depends an the dialect oft he speaker . A different from AusE is BrE because in England some people produce a so called “glottal stop “ in their throat instead of a /t/.The t-flap can be used when a word ends with vowel ,then a/t/ and the next word starts with a vowel . A interesting fact about the Australian English pronounciation ist hat the sweater in American English pronounciation is called „Jumper“ in Australia . One of the most famous sights is the Great Barrier Reef . Its the the only living thing that you can see from space with the naked eye . The Great Barrier Reef is more than 2000 kilometers long and has more than 1500 species of fish, 200 species of birds and 400 species of corals . Dolphins ,Whales , sea snakes and saltwater crocodiles can also be found there . The Great Barrier reef is sadly in danger because of the climate change and the pollution from rivers ,farms and cities on the coast.
A Gap Year Guide to Australian English 
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